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Sage Of The Wise wrote:This sounds like the beginning of a sitcom. Think about it: "Coming this fall to Fox, Ralphie and the Hooker".
Angel_OA wrote:"Tarthelian’s dark eyes slowly examined his foe, standing not more than six feet in front of him."
Sarcasm wrote:Tell him he sucks and offer advice on how to improve, failure and defeat are the best teachers.
Wellsy630 wrote:You need to be bluntly honest with him (not a dick, though). As a writer myself, if someone gave me constructive criticism, I'd take it as a tool to perfect what's not working. If he's serious about improving as a writer, he'll take your criticism in stride. If he gets all pissy, he's not worth doing anything other than fan fiction and movie novelizations.
Otaku No Anime wrote:Why don't you actually give critiques, and then they'll start sucking less? =/
Shindy wrote:Aegis! it has been a while!!! for SECOND TIME!!!!!! U've went missing.
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