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Postby Chip » Tue Apr 06, 2004 6:38 am

(Join in as you come up with ideas...)

The air had a certain chill to it. Rebeard shivered at the sheer wind that blew through his long, brown beard. He shook his head, trying to knock the snow from his face. There were in the mountains; that is, Rebeard and the two Lyn pulling him along. Dell and Asder were their names, as Rebeard had picked up from their discussion with each other. He knew not of where they were going, yet was sure that they were meeting someone at their destination.

Rebeard coughed. His throat was beginning to swell from the weather. His shoes were terribly worn, and would possibly crumble from around his feet any minute.

A jab stung into Rebeard's back. Dell had hit him with the butt of his blade.

"GET MOVING!" Dell commanded, pulling up from the ground on which Rebeard had collapsed.

The prisoner regained his posture, and continued onward; Asder in front of him, Dell following behind.

(That was all that great. Develop a plot though. I've come to enjoy this chain fictions.)
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Postby BustermanZero » Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:47 am

Rebeard sighed as he and his captors continued their march. He really wished he'd known better than to kill a Blood Lyn, but the guy had been standing between him and his prize, and the other man had drawn his weapon first. Of course, when the Lyn came down to it, if you killed one of their own and were caught, you would have to pay. Rebeard was just happy he'd managed to leave the prize for his partner before being caught. He just hoped his friend has able to do something about this mess...
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Postby Leo » Tue Apr 06, 2004 6:25 pm

Rebeard swollowed hard as he thought of the events leading up to this point, misfourtian, lies, death, as all these swirled in his mind, he nearly forgot that he was getting taken to a gruesome fate. He thought of running, though that was suicide, these were well trained Lyn's and to try to kill them no less would be certain death, he was trapped, he thought of what would kill him first, the Lyn's, stravation, or the frost. All he knew was that the treasure would be gone unless his friend could hide it, because many were after them, it was even said they were getting tracked by a Shadowfoot. Speaking of which, he wondered what would happen to them if they were attacked by one, the thought of his and his partner's blood flying every where almost made him vomit. He stopped ofr a second again, but was agin hit by the Lyn to continue moving, Rebeard tried to let them stop for food, but they told him it would take to long and the storm would get worse if they didn't hurry.

"Where are we going?" Rebeard questioned Dell, Dell paused for a minute, probably wondering to tell him, then with a sight he told him, "Estrana". This made Rebeard's heart sank, had he done something so bad as to be sentanced to Estrana as if he were Dancing Violet? All he had done was killed to men, why didn't they deliver him to the next settlement, he could easily escape from one of them. The Lyn's continued walking for several hours until they came to a figure walking alone in the snow, the way he was dressed made Rebeard certain it was obne thing, a Shadowfoot. Rebeard sunk his face down so the Shadowfoot wouldn't see his face, the to Lyn's stayed calm, though Rebeard could see a bit of fear in there eyes.

"Where are you taking this man?" The Shadowfoot said, " Estrana" Asder said, they Shadowfoot opened his eyes briefly, then closed them again, "Why to Estrana?" Dell told him the story of finding him with two dead Blood Lyn's, and the Shadowfoot sighed and began to walk away, the Lyn's started up, then the Shadowfoot tunred around and quickly struck Asdar down, and then stabbed Dell without a notice for the blood on his balde.

"Rebeard the theif I belive." The Shadowfoot said with a grin, " wanted for mass murder and theift. Though it was you." The Shadowfoot then started pushing Rebeard along, it seemed that Rebeard was now in the possesion of a Shaowfoot, the Shadowfoot then said " The names Taz, remeber it scum" and with that they satrted agin.

( I will edit it if you don't want it)
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Postby Chip » Wed Apr 07, 2004 6:37 am

(No, it's fine. Alot of grammar errors, but it will do. I'll post now, I guess.)


Rebeard realized now that escape was inevitable. Dell and Asder could have been easily dumbfounded...but this "Taz"...he could not. He was a Shadow Foot. Men across the Way would go a mile off-course just to avoid crossing paths with a Shadow Foot. This Shadow Foot had dealt with the two Lyn so easily..it was almost as if they let him kill them. They didn't lift a sword before he...

A fist came across the back of Rebeard's head.

"Speed up, you filth," came the harsh voice of Taz.

Rebeard bit his lip to keep from shooting back a sarcastic remark. That was the way for Rebeard. He always had something to say that would leave whom ever he was arguing with dumbstruck. But, now it was time to hold back to offensive phrases and stick to taking the hits like a man.

A gust of snow flew into Rebeard's eyes. He attempted to wipe it off, but his hands were tied behind his back. The bearded prisoner shook his head, and the snow fell away. Rebeard then continued to think about the position he is in.

Jacob had better have gotten away safely with the Samurai Blade.

(There. That's a fine entry. It will do. Continue onward, oh Way fans..)
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Postby Excell » Wed Apr 07, 2004 10:40 am

God decrees Chip a sinner and sends a meteor to slam into the world of his Fanfiction destroying everyone and everything. Rebeard too.
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Postby Greatchickenman » Wed Apr 07, 2004 5:40 pm

And then Greatchickenman the master of all that is alive or dead creates a new world from scratch only to be lived in by the bestestest of people.
And Rebeard cant come back, and Greatchickenman gets all the pussy but nobody else does except those that he likes.
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Postby Excell » Wed Apr 07, 2004 5:57 pm

Greatchickenman wrote:And then Greatchickenman the master of all that is alive or dead creates a new world from scratch only to be lived in by the bestestest of people.
And Rebeard cant come back, and Greatchickenman gets all the pussy but nobody else does except those that he likes.


LMFAO! :lol:

Let me in on it man. Me, Porter, Impossible and like.....Jeramyu. And of course all the really hot girls. They have to come. 8)
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Postby Greatchickenman » Wed Apr 07, 2004 6:10 pm

Ok then. Greatchickenman deems that Excell, Porter, Impossible, Jeramyu, And everyone who is a sexy lady can come live there and they will live a very happy life.
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Postby Chip » Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:09 pm

Come on now. I knew that some one would pull this on me. Seriously guys. We're trying to have some innocent fun, and then you have to come in here and mess with it. I mean, honestly.... :roll:
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Postby War » Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:25 pm

Then a guy named Blan walks in.
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Postby Greatchickenman » Thu Apr 08, 2004 6:57 am

Suddenly Blan gets a really bad stomach ache. He falls down on the floor and then *Pop!* out of his stomach comes an Alien!!!
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Postby BustermanZero » Thu Apr 08, 2004 7:51 am

OOS = Out of Story
IS = In Story

(OOS: Okay people, lets cut the crap)

IS: Jacob sat under the tree, watching the rain come down. He was cold, wet, and hungry. His dark hair looked more brown than black now thanks to the many flecks of mud in it, and his clothes were even worse. Truely, the only thing in good shape about him right now was his pack. It sat beside him under the most protected part of the tree, fully dry. His sword was strapped on the right side, and the Samurai Blade on the other. He had some food left, but he wouldn't if he ate it now, as the settlement was still a day away. Tonight he'd have to make due with the rainwater that fell into his cup, which sat outside of his natural shelter.

There, alone and miserable, Jacob made a silent vow to finish the mission and get Rebeard out of whatever trouble he was in.
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Postby HumanBean17 » Thu Apr 08, 2004 4:58 pm

Jacob sighed deeply. The rain appeared as if it would never let up. Jacob did his best to get comfortable against the rough-barked tree, hoping to get a little rest. But he doubted he would get much sleep... thoughts of everything that happened in the past few hours swam around in his head... He looked around the tree, checking to see if anyone was around. Jacob would have to do his best to be avoiding for the next few days... The Blood Lyn were out for Jacob... and nothing was going to get in their way.

Is it worth it? he thought to himself.

Jacob was an incredible fighter... but he felt very uneasy that someone was chasing him. It wasn't the Blood Lyn that made him so nervous... Jacob had a premonition lodged deep in his mind... The Blood Lyn weren't the only ones after Jacob... Something... unnatural... was out for Jacob... Jacob sighed again and looked over towards his pack. He tooked out the Samurai Sword and unsheathed it. He could only begin to comprehend the power that thrived in the sword. But even so, as he held the sword he could almost feel the power pulsing through his body.

Yeah... It's worth it...

Jacob twirled the sword around casually, and then laided it in his palms... He glanced down at the blade. In the reflection he saw a figure standing above him. Jacob was very startled, but remained calm, analyzing the situation. The figure was covered in shadows... so Jacob couldn't tell if the person was friend or foe... Or human.
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Postby Chip » Fri Apr 09, 2004 6:26 pm

OOS: BMZ, I like your way of thinking. The OOS and IS concept was a simple idea, but a good one nonetheless. You all make me so proud...
:cry: Sorry, it's just tough... :( :( :cry: Okay. I'm going to post now.

IS:


The Shadow continued to stand, straight as an arrow, upon the thick tree branch. Jacob marveled at this Shadow's balance. It was as if the figure had no fear of dropping the 10 feet between the ground and the branch.
Upon examining the Shadow, Jacob noticed that the Shadow wasn't looking at him. With this in mind, Jacob wondered whether the Shadow even knew of his presence.

Could THIS be the Phantom Slasher? Jacob thought to himself.

Then, in a single swift movement, the Shadow had leapt from the branch to the ground. Jacob gasped. This strange figure showed no signs of injury.
The sun shone upon this stranger's clothing. Jacob could now make out this strange character.
The figure was indefinitely a man. Despite the young face, the build of the man could easily be taken to be that of a 30+ year old. There was a crossbow at his right side, and a miniature curved-blade at his left. The hair was of a dirty-blonde tint, and the eyes glowed an eerie green. The hair style was simple: flat and parted down the center. The figure was no-doubt an assassin.
Jacob sat perfectly still. He didn't want this assassin to notice him if not necessary.

The assassin began to walk deeper into the forest. His prey had done well. He would let Jacob live to see another day.


OOS: This entry was not-all-that-great, but it should progress us through the story. This fan-fiction is doing much better than the last one. Please, continue to write with great detail. I like progression, but I LOVE detail. Thank you all for your cooperation, and continue to do well.
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Postby Excell » Sun Apr 11, 2004 5:46 pm

Excell and Porter walk into the room wielding enormous shotmachineguns. Yes, shotmachineguns. They also have sniper scopes. One is called Illuminati and the other is Shadow. We immediately shoot everyone except the hot girls, who we fuck. They enjoy it a lot. They follow us around as our groupies. We kick ass.
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