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Postby Elachim » Tue Jul 25, 2006 1:19 pm

Alundra wrote:this reminds me of a smiliar situation which me and a friend are right now.
I wrote a really great story, he's the one to break it down and laugh at it, attempts to build one that's better then mine, and then I have to become better then he is, which I already am...

Endless battle... I feel for the two of you!

Eh? Wot? :?

Impossible wrote:Well, my first line was actually pure sarcasm. But yes, I think parts of what you've written are very good... The campsite stuff just sucked.

Damn. Ah well...
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Postby Red » Wed Jul 26, 2006 4:13 pm

It was not-that-bad, Elachim. There are so many on the Internet who believe themselves to be true fanfic professionals, and when they finally write something, it reeks of, well, suckishness. (Yes, that is a new word that I made up. Don't look it up.) So needless to say, I was expecting this prologue to be worthless, but you surprised me.

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Postby Alundra » Thu Jul 27, 2006 5:38 am

I was pointing to the fact of two people trying to do the same thing, bickering over which one is the better, pushing themselves to make the best version and in the end hating eachother's guts...
Ken~ says: I'll be a cop by then...
~Alundra~ says:All right, grand tour of china! drivin' around in a cop car!
Ken~says:You'll be wearing the uniform too?
~Alundra~ says:no u'll wear the uniform
~Alundra~ says:i'll just be sitting next to you going woeh woeh woeh ¨-^
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Postby hudabigbadwolf » Tue Aug 01, 2006 9:55 am

Sounds like a good way to improve your skills, if neither of you decide to kill each other before then...
Anyway, good job Elachim, i really liked this work, and dont worry Impossible, if you cant beat 'em, hunt them down, kill 'em and take their place :D
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