The Journey Begins! (Your criticism welcome.)
Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 1:17 pm
The Way: a novelization.
Before you start, I had this idea before I ever heard about anyone else's novelization, so sorry if I'm stealing someone's thunder.
This is only the Prologue so far. I haven't finished Ch 1 yet, but I'm a good way through and it won't be too long 'till the next posting hopefully. (Except I've got exams starting next week. That'll delay it a bit.)
I encourage you to post your comments and criticism in this thread.
N.B. By criticism, I mean constructive critique and not flaming.
I hope you enjoy my little contribution.
Here's the link, check it out:
http://www.crestfallen.us/fan/elachim_prologue.doc
edit: Goldurn typos. Which reminds me, I need a good editor. Any volunteers?
Before you start, I had this idea before I ever heard about anyone else's novelization, so sorry if I'm stealing someone's thunder.
This is only the Prologue so far. I haven't finished Ch 1 yet, but I'm a good way through and it won't be too long 'till the next posting hopefully. (Except I've got exams starting next week. That'll delay it a bit.)
I encourage you to post your comments and criticism in this thread.
N.B. By criticism, I mean constructive critique and not flaming.
I hope you enjoy my little contribution.
Here's the link, check it out:
http://www.crestfallen.us/fan/elachim_prologue.doc
edit: Goldurn typos. Which reminds me, I need a good editor. Any volunteers?