Episode 2 Text Bugs

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Episode 2 Text Bugs

Postby Yuri » Tue Apr 19, 2005 7:01 pm

* START MAP

If you have overwritten this
file, you can download a replacment
at http://lun.cjb.net.

1: replacement
2: New URL. :)
3: Can you even download that file? All I see for download is the full stand-alones.

* THE INTRO!

I'm almost ready,\| just give
me a minute!\|\|\|\^

One space too many before "just".

I think I've begun to figure
it out.\|\.\. Maybe I'll ask my father
about it when I see him.\|\|\|\^

Need a space before "about".

* TRAZIUN'S TUT

First go the main menu.

"to the main"

Most involve reducing
an opponents attributes
or increasing yours
during the Plunge.

"opponent's"

Hit the action key
a menu with three
choices will appear.

"key. A menu"

IMPORTANT:
Two things may stop you
from equiping a blade art.

*** This is a note, not a message, so the user never sees it! ***

2. Having used the
Blade Art twice already.

This sounds weird. Better change it to something like "The Blade Art is in use already." Oh, and one space too many after 2.

* PLUNGE NOMI

It's okay Rhue,\|
It just wasn't you day.

"your day", also: comma should be a period. And it needs a comma between "okay" and "Rhue" (just to be pedantic :))

RSOMAR: Then lets go!

Fairly obvious. "ROSMAR" and "let's"

Apparently your sword is able
to use multiple auras and the
Piercer and Slasher auras have
been inbedded in it for awhile.

* LIDE

No,\.\. I think it is one of the most
flawed doctrines of the Guided.

Between "the" and "most": space too much.

But let's go have a look
any way.

"anyway"

* INSIDE TAVERN

Hey, its okay!\|
She's gorgeous!

"it's okay"

I think I'll pass on that
offer.\| You're better
than me at this kind of
thing any way.

"anyway"

Well,\.\. its not every
day you see a beauty
like her, much less
get a chance to

"it's"

Heh heh.\.\. Thats what you
say...

"That's"

This might be a little
tough to explain,\| and
it's not something I
want every one to hear.

"everyone"

But put us in separate
brackets any way
please.

"anyway"

Right, but let's not
to forget to have
some fun around
town either.

Remove the first "to"

I remember something
very similiar to this
happening a long time
ago...

"similar"

MAN: I don't think
you're really worried
about me losing...

Space between MAN: and I (EV0028-GUY6)

I'm looking for this girl
I used to know.

Rhue says this twice if Traziun is not in the party (talking to Alex)

Rather it beds in the
penubra that exists
between genius and
mental deficieny. [deficiency]

DAR: Kloe,\.\. should we
split up to go and look for
this\..\..\.."thing"?

Space needed before "thing"

Yep,\. you are.\| I tell
you,\. there's never
a boring a day with
you around Rhue.

"a boring day"

* CHECK INTO THE BUNKHOUSE

Thankyou.

"Thank you."

Don't question me.\|
Now please leave this
premis.

"premise"

MAN: If I was a little
younger...

"If I were"

* TALK TO ALAN ON DAY TWO AND NOT HAVING TALKED TO HIM BEFORE

Rather it beds in the
penubra that exists [penumbra]
between genius and
mental deficieny. [deficiency]

* TALKING TO KLOE

Cecilia?\.\. That's not my name [Cecila option]
you idiot!

* CETSA SPEAKING

I hope you're all as
ready for todays
battles as I am!

"today's"

* TRAZIUN'S PLUNGE

Let's here it for
Taram!

"hear"

ALAN: Haha!\| I am
the the greatest!

Remove one "the".

Here is your winner,\|
ALANTRHEOOONUS!

Switch the H and R.

ALAN Ugh...

If draw. Needs colon.

However,\.\. there is a group
that will be making a
trip to a nearby monster
den.

-1 space "a" & "nearby"

* RHUE TELLS TRAZ STORY, AT THE END

I feel kind of priveleged.\.\.\.
I'll have to tell you my story
someday.

"privileged"


I actually had all the stuff for the monster den trip upto Marna Stretch already done too, but most of it is on another hard disk I currently can't access. I found this stuff on a CD-ROM I had lying around. Man, this would be so much easier if I could just commit the change myself.
Yuri
 

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Postby Yuri » Tue Apr 19, 2005 7:04 pm

Oh, forgot to say what was wrong here:

Apparently your sword is able
to use multiple auras and the
Piercer and Slasher auras have
been inbedded in it for awhile.

"imbedded"
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Postby Trihan » Wed Apr 20, 2005 3:14 pm

Embedded actually. :P
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Postby Yuri » Thu Apr 21, 2005 5:28 am

"Imbed" is just a variant of "embed", just like "inquire" and "enquire".
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Postby nerx » Thu Apr 21, 2005 6:09 am

Hmm, I think I know some like these from e4
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