Below, I’ve compiled a list of various grammatical or spelling-related errors in each of the five episodes of The Way. I realize that such errors are to be expected with a project of this magnitude; however, I hope Lun will take action and correct them in the not-so-distant-future in an effort to make The Way one of the most polished RM2K games on the planet!
Each section has a description of the area or scene in which the error was found, the original unedited sentence, and the edited sentence with the correction(s) highlighted in red.
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In order of appearance:
Episode 1
After Strata steals Dippy and wounds Rhue
Wes: “Looks like it's going to rain, we better get move on.”
Wes: “Looks like it’s going to rain, we better get
a move on.”
Episode 2
After plunging with Nomi
Lyrra: “It just wasn’t you day.”
Lyrra: “It just wasn’t you
r day.”
After greeting with Cetsa (Lide)
Traziun: “Right, but let’s not to forget to have some fun around town either.”
Traziun: “Right, but let’s not forget to have some fun around town either.”
After knocking out Rhue (Lide)
Kloe: “Now please leave this premis.”
Kloe: “Now please leave this premis
e.”
Talking to the woman who hates rats (Marna Stretch)
Rhue: “Quite a dilema you’re facing.”
Rhue: “Quite a dilem
ma you’re facing.”
Talking to a man near Tiller (Marna Stretch)
Man: “Nothing much at all as happened today.”
Man: “Nothing much at all
has happened today.”
Episode 3
Near a way post with Kira and Argus
Traziun: “That’s not surprising. All attemtps to tear down Citadels have miserably failed. I don’t think anyone has ever managed to scratch one.”
Traziun: “That’s not surprising. All attem
pts to tear down Citadels have miserably failed. I don’t think anyone has ever managed to scratch one.”
Inside the Blood Lyn quarters (Matalan Battle Grounds)
Dransel: “You’re fresh from the outside aren’t you? They’re aren’t no “commanders” among the Blood Lyn.”
Dransel: “You’re fresh from the outside aren’t you?
There aren’t no “commanders” among the Blood Lyn.”
Episode 4
Gaius talking to Velicia (Estrana)
Gaius: “What have learned so far?”
Gaius: “What have
you learned so far?”
In Sector 2 of the mine (Estrana)
Miner: “All you have to is sit out here and stay alert.”
Miner: “All you have to
do is sit out here and stay alert.”
Talking to a woman with purple hair (Estrana)
Woman: “Tomorrow I’m going to go the Verdana’s Grand Casino to see the qualifying round of the grand tournament.”
Woman: “Tomorrow I’m going to go
to Verdana’s Grand Casino to see the qualifying round of the grand tournament.”
Speaking to Sorya after defeating the Enhanced Shadow Lords
Rhue: “So you aren’t here to destory this new substance are you?”
Rhue: “So you aren’t here to dest
roy this new substance are you?”
In the core facility
Jopaga: “I hope you got plenty of rest because we’re going to cover a lot material today!”
Jopaga: “I hope you got plenty of rest because we’re going to cover a lot
of material today!”
Inside the Grand Casino (Estrana)
Attendant: “You’re opponent has taken ill and will not be able to compete. You will win by virtue of forfeit.”
Attendant: “
Your opponent has taken ill and will not be able to compete. You will win by virtue of forfeit.”
On the balcony of Rhue’s hotel room after Serena flashback (Estrana)
Lexus: “I’ve got to get ready my match now. You’re going to watch me fight right?”
Lexus: “I’ve got to get ready
for my match now. You’re going to watch me fight right?”
After killing two Young Blood Lyn’s and one Regular Blood Lyn (Estrana)
Slade: “Rhue, you should know you’re match against Hadar, the guided rep has been cancelled.”
Slade: “Rhue, you should know
your match against Hadar, the guided rep has been cancelled.”
After saving Kloe from the Lyn (Estrana)
Lexus: “Rhue, I’ve to get going. Something has come up.”
Lexus: Rhue,
I have to get going. Something has come up.”
After the Phantom Slasher kills the Aristotzi (Estrana)
Rhue: “Today is they day. I’ve got to win my match.”
Rhue: “Today is the day. I’ve got to win my match.”
Episode 5
Speaking to Sorya (Estrana)
Sorya: “Kill me if wish.”
Sorya: “Kill me if
you wish.”
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Please feel free to add anything that is not on this list.
Cheers,
-Vile