Alundra wrote:this reminds me of a smiliar situation which me and a friend are right now.
I wrote a really great story, he's the one to break it down and laugh at it, attempts to build one that's better then mine, and then I have to become better then he is, which I already am...
Endless battle... I feel for the two of you!
Eh? Wot?
Impossible wrote:Well, my first line was actually pure sarcasm. But yes, I think parts of what you've written are very good... The campsite stuff just sucked.
Damn. Ah well...